It's
always interesting to hear how someone else attacks the whole novel-writing
process. No two people approach it quite the same way, yet it seems you can
learn a little something from every author once you pick their brain. My good
friend VR Christensen, author of Victorian-Era Historical Fiction (including
her latest novel, Cry of the Peacock) has invited me on a blog tour all about
authors and writing processes. Every author is given the same four questions to
answer, and those questions are then passed on to another author (or two or
three). So here are my questions and answers:
1) What am I working on
now?
Well,
it's a bit of a departure from LarynRising (The Chronicles of Nequam, Book One) and its sequel, Finding Shemballah. My current project
is a middle reader titled The Gift of the
Cornesh, and it fits firmly within the Fantasy genre. I know it's
considered risky to hop around from one genre to the next (not to mention
switching up target audiences in such a drastic fashion), but sometimes you
just have to write what you have to write. For me, the pivotal moment happened
one day when I was (once again) neglecting my children (and their laundry)
while caught up in the haze of a writing frenzy. Somewhere in there my
daughter—then six, now eight—wandered up and asked me if I was ever going to
read her the 'story' I was writing. I stopped what I was doing, looked up at
her, and realized it would probably be at least a decade before she would be
ready to appreciate the manuscript that was stealing her mother away from her.
In that
moment, Isla Bianca Marcelliana Tortar, Princess of the Realm; Duchess of the
Six Isles, was born—complete with blond hair, blue eyes, and three older
brothers.
I don't know what exactly happened, but I suddenly knew
that I had to write something my kids could appreciate while they were still
young. Something they could identify with. Something that represented them and
gave a them a reason to be invested when they were missing meals, clean
underwear, and all the other things that go along with having a mother who
is continually in the throes of writing 'some dumb book' all the time.
The results? So far, so good. They're all very interested in the fates
of their alter egos, and I'm having a ton of fun writing them. I'm currently
somewhere in the bog otherwise known as the-middle-of-the-blasted-book, but I'm
planning on coming out on the other side alive and well by the first of July,
so wish me luck!
2) How
does my work differ from others of its genre?
Well, in terms of Laryn Rising,
the challenge would be finding the genre in the first place. Laryn, my
protagonist, leaves a dystopian-type futuristic society (with her sister and
500 other young women) to join with a group of colonists traveling to a
pastoral colony on a distant planet. Her story is all about overcoming her
identity as a member of the Federation's lowest caste and struggling to
assimilate from a world where everything was provided for her (and demanded of
her) into a society where she must be completely self-sufficient. There's a
space ship and interplanetary travel, yet the theme is far from Science Fiction,
and the target audience is definitely not men (although I've received some
surprisingly great reviews from the men who've read it). If anything, it falls
into the Women's Fiction category - it's just hard to sell that in the book
blurb.
From the reader's standpoint, I would say Laryn Rising and its sequel, Finding
Shemballa, are pretty unique as far as setting and protagonist-circumstance
are concerned. As a History major, I was inspired by the history of our
country, and the resilience of oppressed souls fighting for freedom and family.
I am also fascinated by the idea of taking someone from the future and watching
them learn the basic building blocks of frontier life. Basically, my books tell
an old and familiar story of the human experience from a new and different
angle, with a heroine who's struggles aren't quite like those of any fictional
character I've ever come across.
3) Why do
I write what I do?
All I know is that I need a purpose before I can write anything. Ever.
And for me, that purpose has to be personal, and it has to carry some weight. Taking
regular people and watching what they do under extraordinary pressure
fascinates me. Sometimes I look around at my friends, family, neighbors, etc.,
and wonder who we would become in a crisis. Who would stand up and lead? Who
would collapse under the pressure? Would the person to collapse be the one we
all thought would save us? And then there's the big question of Why? What
motivates people's responses to a crisis, and how can an ordinary person rise
up and do extraordinary things? And all of this is quickly followed by the
terrifying question of which person I would be?
Consequently, I also find great purpose in writing humor. I had (still
have/greatly neglect) a humor blog for a few years, and I love laughter. I love
taking the mundane and finding the funny in it. Why? Because let's face it—the
majority of life is mundane, and if we can't find humor in the mundane then
life isn't any fun. (For a sampling of my other blog, go here.)
4) How
does my writing process work?
For me it starts with a character and a concept. Whether it's the idea
of a twenty-something young woman jumping into the unknown for a chance at
freedom for herself and her sisters, or an almost-thirteen-year-old Princess
who happens along a magic silver egg with a fantastic creature waiting to hatch
out of it, I have to know who my protagonist is, what they're doing, and why.
This generally leads to a word document with names and sketches of all
my main characters, a sketch of the setting, and roughed-out plot plan. Everyone
has to be named before I can write them in, and I usually spend a lot of time
(generally in the bathtub) filling in details and motivations and all the why's
and wherefore's. For me, everything has to make sense. If I can't explain it, I
can't use it. Period.
Then start writing. My general strategy is to write from one conflict
to the next. As soon as one conflict is wrapped up, I see where that leaves things,
figure out what the next one will be, and then I write myself there. This is
mostly determined by what things need to take place logistically, and what I
want the reader to see/know/understand about my character. For instance,
logistically, Princess Isla must find the golden egg, and I also need to
establish her camaraderie with her next-older brother and his best friend Roy.
Naturally, this leads to them planning a crazy scheme to do something they have no
business doing, which then leaves Isla wandering lost through the mountains
alone—at night—thus giving her the perfect opportunity to find said magic egg.
I do keep an outline of sorts in my head, and I like to have a list of
all my major plot points as well. This keeps me heading in the right direction
and helps me see if I start veering off course. It does leave me with a
significant amount of excess material, but thankfully I have a younger sister
who is only too happy to go through and brutally eliminate every unnecessary
thing (and then some), complete with snarky little comments like "Please,
we've heard this ten times already!", "This is so boring," and,
"You must cut this. Now."
And then the edit begins. I've been doing freelance editing work for almost seven years, and the most frustrating thing about editing
other people's work is watching them quit when they think it's 'good enough'.
This is also (in my opinion) the plague of self-published books. Too many
author's think they're done, or want to be done, when they really should have
two or three more rounds of edits to go through. I get it, though, because
there is no agent or editor holding a bar over our heads. There isn't a team of
editors and proofreaders at our disposal, and those last few hurdles are
usually left because they're the hardest ones to get over.
To combat these obstacles, I use a pretty extensive network of beta
readers, and I pick their brains mercilessly. With that said, I've learned to
listen to consensus. It really doesn't matter how much you love that scene, or
what you think that introspective passage adds to your novel, if five out of
six people are bored, confused, or irritated by it, it's not working. If
there's one thing I know, it's that you can't write in a vacuum. Other people
have to be involved in your writing process if you want it to successfully make
contact with readers, and that means reaching out and finding people to give
you honest, intelligent, constructive feedback.
When it comes to editing and revising, my system is far more specific
and detailed than what we have room for here, but that's the gist. When I'm
finally satisfied with everything, I read my manuscript out loud to myself, check once
more for errors, then send it to my proofreader and two or three other sets of
eyes. Then, when I'm sure it's as clean as it can be, I call it good and move
on.
Now, if you want to read more posts answering these same questions, go
back to VR Christensen and follow her links to the other authors posting today.
Below is an introduction to RaShelle Workman, who will be posting her own
answers and sharing a little of what she's done to become such a successful
author. Make sure you check out what she has to say next Monday, June 15th!
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Great post, Jenny! I'm so excited to read your current WIP!
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